英语个人信息表格模板

题目分析：

图表里展示了1999年澳大利亚不同家庭类型的贫困户比例。

household是家庭的意思；couple指一对夫妻或情侣；aged是年老的； poverty是贫穷。

表格里六大家庭类型：single aged person(独居老年人); aged couple (老年夫妻); single, no children(无孩子独居成人); couple, no children(无孩子夫妻)；sole parent(单亲S家庭)；couple with children(有孩子夫妻)。注意这里表格把老年人和相对年轻的成年人分开了，最后all households指所有家庭。

下面是官方范文：

The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.

Couples generally tend to be better off, with low poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.

Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).

Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

范文一共5段：第1段介绍table内容，第2段描述整体及两种只有一个成年人的家庭，第3段描述两种夫妻家庭，第4段描述两种老年家庭，第5段做整体总结对比，下面是逐句分析总结：

The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

Note:

Breakdown：分类/明细

live in poverty：生活在贫困，另一种说法是live under the poverty line (生活在贫困线以下)

Family who were living in poverty: 生活在贫困中的家庭 (who引导的定于从句，先行词是family)

这是一个标准的小作文开头句。模板：The table gives a breakdown of different types of XX in XX (地区) in XXXX(年份). 表格列出了XX地区在XXXX年不同类型的XX的对应数据。

On average, 11% of all households, comprising almost two million people, were in this position.

Note:

这一句率先描述了总体平均占比和人数，

On average: 平均来看

comprise: 包含 分词形式comprising引导分词短语作定语引出数量200万，并放在中间作为插入语，前后都要有逗号。

In this position: 在这种状态下（贫穷） position这里指状态

非常适用于开头同时描写所占百分比和确切数字。模板：On average, #% of XX, comprising ##, were in this position. 平均来看，#%的XX，包含了##（数量），目前处于这种状态。

数量记得要加单位。

However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.

Note:

这一句做了对比，利用%最高的两类与总%的关系（2倍）自然引出两类单身家庭（单亲和独居）。

However: 然而 作为对比的过渡词

Those代指households, 现在分词consisting of引导后置定语修饰those

Double这里是adj.(形容词)，指双倍的

With+数据 是小作文中常见的用法，放到结尾时前面要加逗号

Respectively: 分别的 经常加在几个数据后面，表示分别是。。。

模板：However, those consisting of XX or XX had almost double this proportion of ..., with #% and #% respectively. 然而，那些包含了XX和XX的群体大约是这部分。。。占比的两倍，分别为#%和#%。

Couples generally tend to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%).

Note:

这句用with引导伴随状语，比较了有孩子和没孩子的夫妻家庭with lower ... for XX than XX 伴随着XX比XX更低的。。。（XX应为名词形式） 这是一个比较地道高级的表达

be better of: 更富裕

在一个类别后面直接加（），里面写明数据，这种介绍数据的方式简单高效，一篇作文里可以使用1-2次。

模板：XX generally tend to be better off, with lower...for XX (#) than for XX (#). XX群体通常会更富裕，XX的。。。（##）低于XX的。。。（##）。 开始的XX是个大类，里面包括两小类，先介绍大类，然后对比其中的两小类。

It is noticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.

Note:

本句对刚描述过的4种家庭类型进行分类对比（有孩子vs没孩子）

It is noticeable that... 值得注意的是。。。

模板：It is noticeable that for XX, a higher than average proportion were...at this time. 值得注意的是对于XX，此时。。。的占比高于平均比例。

Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).

Note:

一句话说明并对比了两种老年家庭的贫困率，同时与前面做了比较。比较用到favour XX rather than XX的句式，这里favour是verb(动词)，译为有利于。

Be less likely to: 不太可能

Once again: 再一次

Though: 虽然

Elderly: 年老的

模板：XX were less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured XX (##) rather than XX (##). XX不太可能会贫穷，尽管趋势再一次有利于XX（##）而非XX (##)。

Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

Note:

最后一句总结，单身的家庭和有孩子的家庭普遍比夫妻家庭更可能穷。

Households of single adults 一人住户 = household consisting of only a single adult

Be more likely to: 更可能

模板：Overall the table suggests that XX and XX are more likely to... than...总的来说表格显示XX和XX比XX更可能。。。

表格题目的关键是用灵活的句式、短语配合数据进行分类，对比，总结。

写出高分英语作文不需要浏览很多范文，将同一类型几篇高质量范文分析透彻，并能模仿应用就够了。花3天吃透1篇范文比1天浏览3篇范文更有效果。